To grab your target audience's attention right away, you need a unique hook that helps your game differentiate itself from other games.
To help you, here is a template: What actions does the player get to do? What's your game's genre? What's your game's setting?
Here's my example:
Lead generations of Kings and Queens in this Turn-based 4x Strategy Deckbuilder. Set in 1407 Bohemia, it's your duty to explore, find, and pillage resources to build a massive army to project your empire. If you don't take over land, then your neighbors will.
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